Jo Ann whoâd been writing and submitting manuscripts for more than three years. Personally, Bailey didnât think it would take her that long to sell a book. For one thing, she had more time to write than her friend. Jo Ann was married, the mother of two school-age children, plus she worked full-time. Another reason Bailey felt assured of success was that she had a romantic heart. Nearly everyone in their writersâ group had said so. Not that it had done her any good when it came to finding a man of her own, but in the romance-writing business, a sensitive nature was clearly an asset.
Bailey prayed that all her creative whimsy, all her romantic perceptions, would be brilliantly conveyed on the pages of Forever Yours. They were, tooâexcept for Michael, who seemed bent on giving her problems.
Men had always been an enigma to her, Bailey mused, so it was unreasonable to expect that to be any different now.
âSomething else that might help youâ¦â Jo Ann began thoughtfully.
âYes?â
âWritersâ Input recently published a book on characterization. I read a review of it, and as I recall, the author claims the best way to learn is to observe. It sounded rather abstract at the time, but Iâve had a chance to think about it, and you know? It makes sense.â
âIn other words,â Bailey mused aloud, âwhat I really need is a model.â She frowned. âI sometimes think I wouldnât recognize a hero if one hit me over the head.â
No sooner had the words left her mouth than a dull object smacked the side of her head.
Bailey let out a sharp cry and rubbed the tender spot, twisting around to glare at the villain who was strolling casually past. She wasnât hurt so much as surprised.
âHey, watch it!â she cried.
âI beg your pardon,â a man said crisply, continuing down the crowded aisle. He carried a briefcase in one hand, with his umbrella tucked under his arm. As far as Bailey could determine, the umbrella handle had been the culprit. She scowled after him. The least he couldâve done was inquire if sheâd been hurt.
âYouâre coming to the meeting tonight, arenât you?â Jo Ann asked. The subway came to a stop, which lowered the noise level enough for them to continue their conversation without raising their voices. âLibby McDonaldâs going to be there.â Libby had published several popular romances and was in the San Francisco area visiting relatives. Their romance writersâ group was honored that sheâd agreed to speak.
Bailey nodded eagerly. Meeting Jo Ann couldnât have come at a better time. Theyâd found each other on the subway when Bailey noticed they were both reading the same romance, and began a conversation. She soon learned that they shared several interests; they began to meet regularly and struck up a friendship.
A week or so after their first meeting, Bailey sheepishly admitted how much she wanted to write a romance novel herself, not telling Jo Ann sheâd already finished and submitted a manuscript. It was then that Jo Ann revealed that sheâd written two complete manuscripts and was working on her third historical romance.
In the months since theyâd met, Jo Annâs friendship had been invaluable to Bailey. Her mentor had introduced her to the local writersâ group, and Bailey had discovered others all striving toward the same ultimate goalâpublishing their stories. Since joining the group, Bailey had come to realize sheâd made several mistakes, all typical of a novice writer, and had started the rewriting project. But unfortunately that hadnât gone well, at least not according to Jo Ann.
Bailey leafed through her manuscript, studying the notes her friend had made. What Jo Ann said made a lot of sense. âA romance hero is larger than life,â Jo Ann had written in bold red ink along one margin. âUnfortunately,
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